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Screenwriting feedback is crucial. Every project needs a fresh, objective assessment to diagnose your script's creative and commercial strengths and ailments. It's a fitness test, a private challenge your screenplay takes before it's let out in the open and under the scrutiny of an important player. Maximise improvement between drafts and reach the ready to share and ready to conquer version of your script faster.
TAILORED TO YOUR NEEDS As as assessor for The Australian Writers' Guild, most of the scripts I read are by writers who jump the gun and request a Comprehensive Assessment, when what they have so far reads like a first draft.
To Suit Your First DraftYou are a new talent or a screenplay hobbyist who has just completed an early draft. You are mustering your resources to embark on your next version and would like some feedback before you dive in.
If you are interested in a breezy peer-to-peer experience, I can connect you with other writers in Script Squad. If you prefer a dedicated assessor, here are the options tailored for your early draft. DRAFT GUIDE I read your script twice and provide a 500 word written report identifying three current strengths and three current ailments for you to manage in your next draft. You submit up to 60p - $130 | more than 60p - $170 GENRE GUIDE I read your script once and provide a 500 word written report outlining your movie's genre choices. I measure it against three key genre films, to clarify genre expectations and opportunities to expand on them. You submit up to 60p - $80 / more than 60p - $120 *AWG TIER ONE WRITTEN REPORT "Highly recommended for first time and emerging writers and / or writers whose project is at an early stage of development. Writers provide a one line and a one paragraph synopsis, a 20-30 page writing sample (one act or segment) or treatment from the project they are developing and single A4 page with notes for further work (if so desired). The AWG assessor provides a maximum of three pages of written feedback." AWG website AWG members: $220 / Non AWG members - $320 |
To Suit Your Revised DraftYou are a seasoned writer with an early draft, or a new talent who has nurtured your screenplay through a couple of upgrades into a solid narrative machine. Now let's make it better.
You are a new talent or a screenplay hobbyist who has just completed an early draft. You are mustering your resources to embark on your next version and would like some feedback before you dive in. If you are interested in a breezy peer-to-peer experience, I can connect you with other writers in Script Squad. If you prefer a dedicated assessor, here are the options tailored for your revised draft. PRIMARY ASSESSMENT I read your script twice and write for you a logline, a one paragraph synopsis and a 1000 word assessment reporting on the primary considerations of the current draft: Genre, Premise, Structure, Character, Dialogue You submit up to 60p - $220 / more than 60p - $290 *COMPREHENSIVE ASSESSMENT (AWG Tier Two Written Report) I read your script twice and write for you a logline, a one page synopsis and a 2000 word comprehensive assessment reporting on the following considerations of the current draft. Premise, Character, Story Structure, Scene Structure, The Ultimate Scene, Dialogue, Tone, Audience. AWG Members - $495 / Non AWG Members - $595 SCREENPLAY PROOFING This is the final polish, where we ensure that writing and formatting is impeccable, so the reader doesn't drop your script on page one. We correct layout, spelling and grammatical errors. $1.50/page (minimum fee $20) |
*For An AWG Tier One Report or a comprehensive Assessment, call the AWG TODAY on (02) 9319 0339. YOU CAN ask for your project to be assessed by NicHOLAS T, OR ANY OTHER ASSESSOR ON THE PANEL.
For all of your other script requirements, it's time to contact ME DIRECTLY.
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