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Screenwriting feedback is crucial. Every project needs a fresh, objective assessment to diagnose your script's creative and commercial strengths and ailments. It's a fitness test, a private challenge your screenplay takes before it's let out in the open and under the scrutiny of an important player. Maximise improvement between drafts and reach the ready-to-conquer version of your script faster.

To Suit Your First Draft

As as assessor for The Australian Writers' Guild, most of the scripts I read are by writers who jump the gun and book their baby in for a Comprehensive Assessment, when what they have so far reads like a first draft. Here are the options tailored for your early draft.
 
DRAFT GUIDE
I read your script twice and provide a 500 word written report identifying three current strengths and three current ailments for you to manage in your next draft.
You submit up to 60p - $130   |   more than 60p - $170

GENRE GUIDE
I read your script once and provide a 500 word written report outlining your film's upcoming battle against three key films on the path of your genre choices, directing you toward your script's potential. 
You submit up to 60p - $80   /   more than 60p - $120

*AWG TIER ONE WRITTEN REPORT
"Highly recommended for first time and emerging writers and / or writers whose project is at an early stage of development. Writers provide a one line and a one paragraph synopsis, a 20-30 page writing sample (one act or segment) or treatment from the project they are developing and single A4 page with notes for further work (if so desired). The AWG assessor provides a maximum of three pages of written feedback."  
AWG website
AWG members: $220   /   Non AWG members - $320

To Suit Your Revised Draft

You are a seasoned writer with an early draft, or a new talent who has nurtured your screenplay through a couple of upgrades into a solid narrative machine. Now let's make it better.

PRIMARY ASSESSMENT
I read your script twice and write for you a logline, a one paragraph synopsis and a 1000 word assessment reporting on the primary considerations of the current draft:
Genre, Premise, Structure, Character, Dialogue
You submit up to 60p - $220   /   more than 60p - $290

*COMPREHENSIVE ASSESSMENT (AWG Tier Two Written Report + FREE BONUS Genre Guide)
I read your script twice and write for you a logline, a one page synopsis and a 2000 word comprehensive assessment reporting on the following considerations of the current draft.  
Premise, Character, Story Structure, Scene Structure, The Ultimate Scene, Dialogue, Tone, Audience. You will also receive a Genre Guide.

AWG Members - $495   /   Non AWG Members - $595

SCREENPLAY PROOFING - $1.50/page (min 25p)
This is the final polish, where we ensure that the reader doesn't drop your script on p1. We correct layout, spelling and grammatical errors for when you need your pages to represent your best effort.

*For An AWG Tier One Report or a comprehensive Assessment, call the AWG TODAY on (02) 9319 0339 and ask for your project to be assessed by NicHOLAS T. 

For all of your other script requirements, it's time to contact Mango Tree.

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